Palace of Sweets

I wrote this right after I had a mix of the following:red vines, junior caramels, Charleston chews, sour patch kids, sour patch kids watermelon, skittles, M&M's, and a lot of other kinds of candy.

King Sour Patch sits atop his
candy corn throne,
With his queen of chocolate
Who's all his own

Their palace made
Fully of candy,
Its construction is
Really quite handy.

Made of billions of gumdrops
Of every color,
Even of Mt. Everest
It is much taller.

Heaps of licorice
Red and black,
Line the streets
Without a single crack.

The candy people
live in such peace,
that they believe they
don't even need police.

But to the sugar-coated world
of the Palace of Sweets
When the children find you,
You will be good eats!

Author's Note

I know this is probably some of my worst writing (and I was on a sugar high while I was writing this :P), but please review anyways! :D Oh, and I don't own any of the candy names, like sour patch kids. I just used them in the writing. oh, and I know in the picture for this, the castle is made out of hard candy, but I imagine them as gumdrops. I just find them better then hard candies... :P

Reviews

[Abbie]

yeah, I know, definitely not my best. I'm kind of hyper, being on a sugar high and all, so yeah...

[Harley (arbiter)]

Uhh... different... huh... I don't really know what to say... suger highs are fun though. Never wrote in one

[Sophie]

Wait... yoy had sour patch kids... and you didn;t share them with me?????!!!! Then again, i don;t suppose you could have... considering we don;t live together....
Not your best, but a fun read :)