The Perfect Murder

After getting away with the murder of a girl with the perfect weapon, The murderer celebrates, and thinks this:

Ha!
I've done it!
I have created
the perfect murder!

Ten years!
Ten years,
I have gotten away wit it!

Nobody
could figure it out!
Nobody ever will!

You fools will be searching
for years
for the murder weapon!

You won't find it though!
You can't!
It's impossible!

I was smart enough
to use the weapon
that melts away!

Leaving no evidence
 for you to find!
Ever!

That's right
The PERFECT weapon
For the PERFECT murder

I used an icicle!
Now, it is ten summer's past
and the icicle is long melted!

There is now way
to get any evidence
for her case!

So now, the joke is on you!
Try and prove
that I murdered her now!

Author's Note

well? what do you think? Review! :D

Reviews

[Asb]

hmmmm...interesting write :)

[MandaBear]

Interesting. I liked it a lot. very clever!!

[Virtuosa X]

This is quite a piece. Mysterious with and edge of humor. I like it.

[EileenMarie]

Clever, whitty........ almost fun yet very sinister! Great job

[Owlgirl]

Wow, I love the sarcastic, sinister, laughing tone that the whole thing was written in. Great plot, love it!

[Schyala]

I really like the idea and plot, but you should add some more insanity to it, i think that would make it even more better!

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like it. Reminds me of the secret ww2 plans to make an ice bullet. Oh and uh the line "there is now way" I think that should be no way? Other than that great write! Oh and don't post this because its kinda a confession. Tisk tisk. Thought you could get away. Lol

[luna11]

YES! PROOF AT LAST! SHE'S WRITTEN A POEM ABOUT IT! THIS IS WRITTEN PROOF! SHE EVEN POSTED IT ON THE INTERNET! WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
:D
Great poem , clever idea.
It's funny. Well done.
xx :P

[Amanda]

I like how it sounds like a crazy guy and I like the humor in it. My friend always says its the perfect murder weapon too. :)

[Wild Willow Blue]

This piece has a note of humor to it, which I like. I love the excitement that the murderer exudes. It's sort of a light poem about murder, rather than a dark poem about murder. That's nice. Great job.