Not Forever

I may say goodbye, but it's not forever!

I have to go
we have to part
but don't worry
You're still in my heart

It's time to leave
for now, this is goodbye
lets try our best
not to cry

It will be alright
We'll soon be together
but until then, I promise
You will stay in my heart forever

Author's Note

I know it's short, but whatever! :D oh, hey, please review! :D BTW, the poem has nothing to do with me, I won't be leaving writerscafe anytime soon! :)

Reviews

[Jason van Dongen]

I'm glad to hear you won't be leaving us, Abbie!
I like this poem [I am a sucker for verses that rhyme].
Keep writing!

[Schyala]

A very good simple poem, I think you should try to make it longer and more contrasting, I like poems where I have to anaylze. Just a suggestion.

[Owlgirl]

Lovely poem, great job!

[Wild Willow Blue]

Simply sweet.

[Amanda]

This really good. Simple, yet touching :)

[Chloe]

Awesome! I was touched

[Virtuosa X]

Brief but crazy good. nice job

[Harley (arbiter)]

Holy fliddlebiscuts! This Reminds me of some of my experiences and about 5 Journey songs!!!! This was Awesome! Love it!