Silly little thoughts.

Silly little thoughts I had this morning.

Am I throwing this party to validate my existence.

"See I do have friends”,

why are you so hesitant,

to invite yours?

I pondered over my 9am Gin and Tonic.

Is it because you think I’m an alcoholic?

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Some depth of "heartaches" has been shown to the universe penning down some deep words of your possessive "maze"---The thoughts of your maze. Sometimes... we put some questions to ourselves and find the answer to know the reason why the life has turned so fast. But ... if we take some time to re-think ov`r "blessings" and "positivism" then ... we come to know how the life "could" turn to what.. & how it "turns" to what. You`ve pen`d a write having a title "Silly Little Thoughts" but I think, this write`s many verses to get known to our life keeping the value of your this last line: "Is it because you think I’m an alcoholic?" Excellent!

[Kenneth Nicholas Lowe]

Damn Rach, every poem you write just hits the spot with so many interpretations and thoughts and imagery....like this...

[Hitchhiker]

Gotta love that nine o'clock gin and tonic. Something to dull the day and your existence. I have been there with you except mine was Jim Beam, water back. To be able to write this poem you must have plenty of demons rattling around inside you and you're dealing with them the best way that you can. You'll find a better way, but this way will leave scars.

[Rene Salinas]

I like the nature of this silly little thoughts. I was young once for about fice seconds I think and then the miserable mantle came down on me and made me like three hundred years older in one go. But during that five seconds of youtfull attitude I remember the superflous nature of things. I prefered pills but if Gin is your thing is never too early. As for friends "never cared back then" still don't have many close to none. You want to labbel yourself? Irrelevant I'd say it will get in the way of the fun!

Hurry those five seconds run very fast!


Thankyou

[A. Amos]

Good thoughts you shared my friend:)