Edit.

I can be raw and edgy too,

Just give me time to edit..

Reviews

[Christopher Robin]

Your ellipsis is one dot short,

I see what you did there.

-Robin

[rach]

You got it!
Thanks.

[Mayank]

tch... tch... brilliant..
tch tch...

[rach]

Thank you.

[BennyBooth]

LOL .... you've got it :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

Hehe! I am interpreting in this way - We can be ideal or cutting edge if we had the opportunity to re-do things that have affected us otherwise.
Thank you.

[genocide]

meaning you need to take time to edit stuff this could be longer though

[Wórdsmíth]

The imagery` quiet heartfelt to me. Sometimes, we loose the chances to make things clear and then some cliches take ov`r the heart beats with pain; some old memories. But, if the heart`s full of love; mind`s relaxed having some pleasure to others, we seize the chances to stop it "loosing"/falling off the "time". Only two lines`ve expressed the melodic sounds of your melodious heart with some deep insights of "aches". Nice flow of ink.

[Rene Salinas]

Creaive and humorous, sadly real time does not seem to comply with editing rules. No time for rehearsing in life you either are or not.So I guess editing in that sense would be "Let me try again?".

Thankyou