The End

A poem on life.

Different beginnings for all

Some get a head start

While others start far behind

 

Different journeys for all

Some long, some short

Beautiful or dreadful

 

Make yours the best of all

And else's better

A journey exciting yet safe.

 

Because the end is same for all.

An end, no one can evade.

 Anytime is the end, death.

Author's Note

Please give suggestions to make it better.

Reviews

[Akshita]

u might hav made it a better 1....
but still well written...

[Khushi]

I would really like it if you could give me some suggestions to make it better. Thanks.

[Saddam]

Because the end is same for all.
An end, no one can evade.
Anytime is the end, death.
exactly we can hide with this which is greatest truth of live....but some people chalenge it and they found it with very difficulty. Love your creation.

[Khushi]

found it as in??
Thank you.

[Saddam]

you are welcome dear....keep on writing.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Well written Khushi...read more...you will become even better! :)

[Khushi]

I'm 14 and reading a lot is surely one of my future plans. Thankyou :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Short and sweet.Well written.

[Desiree]

I like it. I would say it is short but to the point. I am confused a little toward the end with the switch from traditional to slang language. However it is a good poem. Thank you for sharing.

[Khushi]

Thanks for ur suggestion. I changed coz to becauce. Should I do something else?

[Desiree]

Nooo I think you did well :)

[Praveeta]

This is lovely. Nicely penned.

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you for sharing this good poem....Bravo.......................