Another Regret

Years ago,I promised
to be there whenever, forever.
But I failed
when you needed me more than ever.

The moment you killed yourself,
that promise was broken.
No one to blame but myself.
One mistake, not to be forgiven.

Still I try, and say sorry
to you lost friend.
No solution there can be.
Because I let it end!

From a sorry friend.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

So much sad emotion in this piece. Nicely written.

Kaze~ :-)

[Khushi]

Thankyou :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Rachelle]

sadness :(
We often look back with regret and think about what we could have done. It has been done, though, and all we can do is move on and learn and grow.

[Khushi]

Thankyou for your review. I agree with you.

[Praveeta]

A sad one indeed.

"Years ago,I promised
to be there whenever, forever.
But I failed
when you needed me more than ever."

[Sami Khalil]

Regrets are so hard, promises are broken, sorry is a great token...Sad but good...:)...............

[paras]

such an emotional and powerful write. great work keep it up :)

[Saddam]

The moment you killed yourself,
that promise was broken.
No one to blame but myself.
One mistake, not to be forgiven.
THIS IS ONE OF MY BEST POEM WHICH I HAVE EVER READ DEAR....Very deep and very sad. I feel some thing from my behind with this. Loss always like a shool, jo hamesha chubhta hi rahta hai.

[Khushi]

Thankyou so much. "best poem ever read" that is such a big thing u have said! I feel overwhelmed.

[Saddam]

good work may be praised dear. thanks, you are welcome.