Waqt Pe Hasi

This 4-liiner was an instant thought, when one of my friend was in some trouble.....!!

Waqt pe hasi si aati hai,
khushi aa ke wapis kyu chali jaati hai..
Kehte hai dost to hum sabhi ko ,
par kuch ke dukh se ankhein nam kyu ho jaati hai...

Author's Note

For those who didn't understood. In English :
Why I get a smile on Time,
Why happiness comes and goes after..
We are friends to many,
yet Why we cry when some special friend is sad....

I know it leaves its essence in English.. But try to feel words .. :)

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

Hindi poem! Wah Wah! Shayari!

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU Shivam ^-^

[Vikrantsingh]

Kya baat hai bhai,
Aankhen num ho gayi..
Kuch aur aachi aachi sher - Share kiya kar :)

Love it - Stealing for my personal ones :P

[smilempsn]

I guess, u wanted to write 'Personal use' :P

Also I thought you said, you dunta knw hindi 8 - )

[Vikrantsingh]

I know hindi but i'm way poor with my hindi writing skills :/

[Vikrantsingh]

Bro, I'm Singh.. We speak hindi, We abuse in hindi, We eat sometimes hindi :P

[smilempsn]

:( :( Tell me one thing... will u ??? :| :|

[Vikrantsingh]

Will I what?

[smilempsn]

Oopss.. I meant.. Will u answer it :P

[Vikrantsingh]

Question kya hai, then it depends!

[smilempsn]

Question hai.......
What makes you so sure, that I am a male ??

[Vikrantsingh]

Sorry i don't know/sure :/

[Akshat♥]

vikrant u r in trouble lol :D

[Vikrantsingh]

I know man... ab kya hoga... i called her dude.. Lmao :D

[Vikrantsingh]

Akshat you are toh male na??

[Akshat♥]

ofcourse lol....any doubt?? check my pics on my profile :D

[Vikrantsingh]

Well i don't peep on other profile/pics.. but ya i did now.. and you Male.. Congrats!!!

Kidding bro :P

[Akshat♥]

I don't mind..

[Vikrantsingh]

;)

[smilempsn]

well Answer me boys... Why in this whole world you both thought that I was a MALE ??? I mean.. whatz the problm in me :P

[smilempsn]

Vikrant.... you didn't only said me 'Dude'.. but.. 'bro..bhai...man..dude' all these were refred by you.. where and when I was considered :P :|

Give a an explanation you both...plzzz ^-^ (may be I can change that thing, so that people can consider me being a girl.....at the first moment only :D ) ^_

[Vikrantsingh]

smilempsn: Sorry I wasnt sure, As I thought you might be boy (No hard feeling)
Well I speak this way always. Sorry I wasn't sure. If you want to change everyone's perception you need to keep your name somewhat real or else keep you picture so that we can assume that you are girl.

Sorry again,
It wasn't intentionally. As i wasn't aware about your gender.

Cheers!!!
Vikrantsingh Parmar :P

[Akshat♥]

I totally agree with vikrant :P

[smilempsn]

arreyy Vikky (I hope u wont mind ^_

[smilempsn]

by god..!! I wrote innaaa bada message :| N nothing got posted here.. :|
needa write it again :|

[smilempsn]

arrey Vikky(I hope u wont mind ^_-) .... tum toh serious ho gayee.. sorry n all.. Its ok Buddy... I am fine about it... And waise bhi, You are not the first one to think that ways :P

This Akki(Akshat), was the first one to say that.. and then many other said it too.. So its fine dera... I just thought of asking you both...what reasons are ther that I am in a gender crisis .. thatz It ;)

well.. I like my Display pic and Display name... :) verrrryyyy much..!!
SO sorry boss, wont change that.....
Let the world be in a Myth ;) ,
and I can bear the consequences :P :D ^-^

[Vikrantsingh]

Still your enigma. Atleast just let us know. Your girl/guy.
Good Night.

[smilempsn]

..shubhratri.. :) :)
N I am 100% pure girl :P B-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks :)

Cheers!!
Vikrantsingh

[smilempsn]

^-^ ;)

[Vikrantsingh]

:P

[smilempsn]

:D

[Vikrantsingh]

Lol :P

[smilempsn]

:O :O what :O :O

[Vikrantsingh]

You're this poem got most comments from me now :P

[smilempsn]

:P comments are just public chit chats... and for public's entertainment ;)

[Vikrantsingh]

Yes :P true

[Ryan]

I think, in English, to capture the essence a bit better:

"Why do I smile sometimes
Why does happiness come and go
We have many, many friends
Why do I cry when they are sad"

Impressive write. love and wonder, empathy. great job :)

[smilempsn]

ThankU for a better translation.. ^-^

[Ryan]

no problem :)

[Gaurav Walia]

wah!! wah!! kya baat hai...CHEERS! ;)

[smilempsn]

ThankU :)