CREATIVITY

Just a poem

CREATIVITY

 

I am the empire 
Clear off the moss
Over the dead and alive

As well..

That yellow filthy mud
covering the vice

And virtue as well..

Wipe them out…

Let not seasons play hide and seek
let not the rain cause a drain
Let not wind make a fake 
Let not lake sweet away the mud
Of my rolling kingdom

Called creativity

Let me have my share

Of orgasm in the discovery

Of new truths and facts

Let the orgies

Of enthusiasm after perspiration

Invite more inspiration

Let me drink

The ambrosia for endless

Bouts of mating..

While elixir of life overflow

Rendering me mad

For this life and its beauty

Reviews

[Tracie D'Angelo]

I like where this is going. Very eloquent wording and great imagery. I wasn't too thrilled about the rhyming in the 3rd stanza. Very good piece!

[Huggy Bear]

Very interesting and inspiring.

[Daniel Gardner]

unique writing style. Reads well for the type of poem. I like it.

[Richard Williams]

Imaginative, unique. Your liking creativity to a rolling kingdom is terrific, as is the "orgasm in the discovery" as well as "The ambrosia for endless/Bouts of mating..." This was creative. Well done.

[dovetailer]

Isn't that just how creation can be...sesuous, exciting, leaving us breathless...enrapt...we reach our and fondle and probe and caress each thought until it grows and fills and explodes upon our tongue...alive in the knowledge that we have given birth to a new and perfect thing...never before seen or heard...set loose to be desired and a gleam in the eyes of those who read...

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what a rollercoaster of visual ideas you have spilled onto the page...delicious descriptions..

[lavina k.]

Its a beautiful creativity of your piece....you have great and great imagination!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing!!!!!

[ForTheWorld]

and there it goes, the fruit of your creativity, it's beautiful, brilliant, such a wonderful masterpiece.. =D

[Randolf Ramos]

Truly is that creativity is the drive towards a masterpiece, we are unique in everyway that the possibility are boundless if we dig into our imagination. Things will perfectly work well if we trust in our creative capabilities, and our works are the living evidence of how we could harness the power of our creativity.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. We need to dance and celebrate in all things in life. We need to create and know great pleasure. I like the feel and emotion of the poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote