SELF IMAGE

A poem

SELF IMAGE

 

Cant you see me?

I am very much clear and perfect..

 

You look into this mirror

With the same eyes

That I look into..

You can see me..

 

Never look at my face

If you want to see me..

Look into this mirror in my hand

I cant see myself without this mirror

In my hand..

Then how can you see me..

Without this mirror??

 

You dunderhead

Stop looking at me….

Look at my reflection.

I feel ashamed.

Reviews

[Nautili]

self perception.....hmmmmm. My girlfriend thinks she is thrifty, at times, I think she is cheap.Perhaps I need to look thru her mirror to see the positive side. Nice job.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

very clever write very clever indeed

[An owl on the moon]

There is an honesty here.. about knowing others.. knowing ourselves through the eyes of others.. and our own reflections and recollections. Your words hit hard and rock the place we all stand.

[Ed Hart]

"dunderhead"! i hate it when you call me dunderhead