Just Believe

Just Believe

A Poem by smurfett

I see your pain my friend
And it cuts me deep inside,
To know the anguish you've been through
And how you try to hide.
You paste a smile upon your face
For everyone to see,
But no one knows what you've been through
How your heart has cease to be.
We've all lost loved ones this is true
But there's one you cannot compare,
The loss of a child, God how can it be?
Such feeling of hopeless despair.
I can't even imagine, Lord willing I won't
Not sure I could even go on,
But God had a plan, for your little man
For the Angel he found in your son.

© 2012 smurfett


Author's Note

smurfett
For my dear friend....

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Poignant subject and nothing is more heart breaking than loss of a child, sorry for your friend loss and may God give her strength!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smurfett

11 Years Ago

Thank you. It is still difficult for her. And unfortunately I am using this same poem for yet anot.. read more
A. Amos

11 Years Ago

I'm sorry about your friends my condolences to and you and both of your friends...Will keep them in .. read more
You're right, there is nothing to compare to the horrific abcess that envelopes the human spirit like the loss of a child no matter how old. I could go on all day but words simply do not suffice. thank you

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smurfett

12 Years Ago

I have never had to suffer that pain by a loss of a child, but I have lost dear family members, at a.. read more
I was going to post an old poem on this subject today but didn’t.
It’s a difficult subject and isn’t covered much; I think you’ve done a very good job.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smurfett

12 Years Ago

Thank you Mark...I actually wrote this for a friend of mine that lost her son. He was a friend of m.. read more
I feel the emotions in your poem just as I share in the loss of a loved one• Nice poem keep, it up

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smurfett

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the read and comments poet...=)
The last line is really the power in this poem. Good work, and my greatest sympathies to your friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


smurfett

13 Years Ago

Thank you much Elaenor. We both appreciate it. =)
your dear friend from what i Can aee. Is very fortunate to have a friend as wise. The poenm itself is very well written the poem in turn is fantastic.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smurfett

13 Years Ago

Thank you very much Ian. I just can't stand the hurt she is going through. I hope this can at leas.. read more
So sad ...... very sweet of you to write this for your friend

Posted 13 Years Ago


smurfett

13 Years Ago

=)..thanks yos
Patient Poet (Yos)

13 Years Ago

You are welcome

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Added on August 19, 2012
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smurfett
smurfett

Lutz, FL



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I am so moved by the vast differences in people and what inspires them to put pen to paper. Everyone has a story to tell. I hope my words can please and inspire those around me as well... more..