I have absolutely no idea where this came from, or what inspired me to write it. It is simply my attempt to bring to mind, true evil in a person. Perhaps it comes from my years of service in law enforcement. But rest assured, everything is okay in my mind.....I 'm not slipping over the edge here.....lol.
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its a extream writing...
thanks for sharing the words....
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Hi Glitch,
Thanks very much for reviewing my poem. Much appreciated.
12 Years Ago
its fine...actually evil and hitler one of the interesting subjects for me...im a weird...i cant hel.. read moreits fine...actually evil and hitler one of the interesting subjects for me...im a weird...i cant help it...
thanks...^^
I am glad to hear that you are not, as you wrote, "slipping over the edge." :)
It really was quite a strange poem to read but I guess one sees some pretty evil people when one is working in law enforcement, and perhaps there was a particularly bad one, just needing to be written about. Or possibly there were a number people, but all much the same, so that the end result was just this really evil creature ... At any rate, I think you achieved what you set out to do.
The last two lines took me by surprise but were a great ending.
Look forward to reading more of your writing.
Lizbeth
Posted 13 Years Ago
13 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Lizbeth. It's a weird poem, that is normally out of character from what I writ.. read moreThank you very much, Lizbeth. It's a weird poem, that is normally out of character from what I write. I appreciate the review.
13 Years Ago
That's fine, and it's good to see things that are totally different from the usual ... I am often am.. read moreThat's fine, and it's good to see things that are totally different from the usual ... I am often amazed to see how an idea develops from the first line to the end.L
I'm Scott. I live in a small town on the Oregon Coast, and have been writing in one form or another since I was about thirteen years old. I have always enjoyed expressing myself through the written w.. more..