Lover

My Cinquain submission for the Blue Rose Cafe contest

Lover

Alluring, enduring

Kisses, caresses, whispers

My passion in life

Wife

Reviews

[Distantview123]

Nicely done. Good economy of words! A lovely tribute to your wife! ~ Robert.

[Scott S]

Hi Robert,
Thanks very much for the review. I had never dabbled in writing a cinquain before.....it was done for a contest in Helena's Blue Rose Cafe. Thank you for taking the time to read it.
Scott

[SyberRose]

Lovely Cinquain...nicely done Scott...Rose

[Scott S]

Hi Rose, thanks very much for the review. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Scott

[zainul]

You have honored your wife and yourself through this wonderful Cinquain.
Congratulations,Scott!!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is so sweet what a lucky wive you have. Nicely written.

[Scott S]

Hi Carolann, thanks so much. That's a nice compliment. Thank you for the review.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Angel Bird]

Hey this is great.

[Scott S]

Thank you, Angel. I appreciate you taking the time to review it.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Simple and made me smile :)

[Scott S]

Thanks very much, Adam.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you for writing

[angelina neves]

lovely!

[Scott S]

Hi Angelina. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing it.

[Helen Crutchett]

Ah yes, I like this very much! Well done in every respect and thank you for submitting this lovely cinquain to the challenge! ~ Helena :)

[Scott S]

Thanks very much, Helena. I enjoy your contests a lot......always a pleasure.

[Mark]

I have never written in this form, but the three I have read so far are pretty interesting, Scott. Good luck to you! Please check out my submission, "RISEN".

[Scott S]

Mark, thanks very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. I will check out "Risen". Take care.