Swan

Just a little piece about love and beauty. Here I go with that whole romance thing again.

Lilac and fuchsia

Your scent so divine

Skin of milk and honey

Takes my breath away

A welcome distraction

When you walk into the room

Taken hostage by your gaze

Across a room full of souls

Afloat on the river

Of a smile so enchanting

Drowning in the current

When you whisper my name

A tiny patch of heaven

Resides inside your kiss

Lustful thoughts abounding

My swan has come to call

Reviews

[Janet Hadson]

Nothing wrong with romanticism. An enchanting poem. Universal concept. Wonderfully written. 'A tiny patch of heaven resides inside your kiss'. How exquisite to experience heaven like this. How soulful your words.

[Scott S]

Hi Janet,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work. I am sorry about the late response in getting back to you. I was out of town for a few days, and did not spend much time in the Cafe until this morning again. Your encouragement is really appreciated. I am finding more and more, that poetry seems to suit me well. I love the creativity that it inspires in me. Thanks again, and I look forward to reading some of your work.

Scott

[Janet Hadson]

You are very welcome. I am putting a book of poems together at the present but I will get back to writers cafe soon. You do write well. I enjoyed reading your poems.

[Scott S]

Thanks again. Good luck with your book of poems.