A Crush

the first boy i really liked

We were young, younger than most
Your kind green eyes and caring smile
They mesmerized me
Did u know how I felt?
I thought so.
Did you care how I felt?
I thought so.
Did you feel the same?
I thought so.

But then she came, deceptive and dark
She twisted you
She changed you
She poisoned your mind with lies
3 long months I sat there quietly
While my emotions tore me to shreds
Anger, longing, hurt were always present
Eventually I made my decision
To end our already estranged connection.

When she left you, like I knew she would
You woke up and opened your eyes
And finally saw her deceptions and lies
She played you like a fool
You should've known all along
But it wasn't until she took your best friend back
That you realized you were wrong

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

wow c this is so powerful and GOOD!!!

[C.C. Marx]

AWww thanks Jenny-kins!!!

[Sami Khalil]

And finally saw her deceptions and lies
She played you like a fool.
A nice write.

[C.C. Marx]

thank you very much again, all your reviews are appreciated

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. My pleasure.

[Alyssa Carlstrom]

I can relate to your fear of him finding another girl, and... it's scary. But this poem has a happy ending, and that cheered me up. Good work!

[C.C. Marx]

thank you! and it was scary and heartbreaking but i got over it and moved on...its all you can do

[Wem Ortiz]

feeling this.

[C.C. Marx]

It sucks, i used to be good friends with him now we don't even talk

[Wem Ortiz]

well, life seems to be unfair sometimes,
some people don't realize it
looking and looking, acting like a fool,
not knowing that the person whom she/he's looking is right next to his/her

that's being blind, why look for a person whom lies beyond your set,
i mean, why be with the person who surely tricks you
that's why we humans easily get deceived from what me see and what we felt
turns out that life gives you lemons its bitter its sweet.

[C.C. Marx]

That pretty much sums up things except the girl who went out with him only went out with him because she knew i liked him, she never really liked him.

[Wem Ortiz]

how old are you if you don't mind? just message me if its private

[C.C. Marx]

umm thats a little personal but my profile should give u a slight clue

[Wem Ortiz]

I see, i guess at your age those things really happens :D been there

[C.C. Marx]

Yep but that was a year ago so I'm kinda over it but i was brought up the other day so it made me think...the girl however, i wrote another poem about her, we don't speak much either

[Wem Ortiz]

aww things will pass :)

[C.C. Marx]

ehh i'm not really sure i really wanna be friends with her anymore, she was never a good friend