Bewitched

Relationship self-sabotaging ...

You enveloped me with your brilliant browns,
deeply penetrating me, accepting my naked soul.
You warmed my hands, squeezing them with definite wisdom,
basking my heart with incandescent sunshine.
You showered me with pocketfuls of wonderment
thrilling me with intense chimerical joy.
Sublimely I succumbed, surrendered, savoured...
till suddenly I seeped strange tears.
Bewitchingly I lie forlorn again
bewildered at my eternal sabotage.
This victim resiliently encages my heart
endlessly bleeding from internal solitariness.

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[Ardra]

Sublimely I succumbed, surrendered, savoured...
till suddenly I seeped strange tears.
Bewitchingly I lie forlorn again
bewildered at my eternal sabotage...

eternal sabotage... a feeling that really cant be expressed..but you did explain well with this poem... very nicely done ..