Stargazer Girls ♥ ☆

Boys like you

are not for girls like me,

who speak with the stars

and spend days in melancholy.

Searching for answers,

but only finding clues

to the vast mysteries of life

that are my muse.

~ ☼ ☽ ☿ ♀ ♁ ♂ ♃ ♄ ♅ ♆ ♇ ~

Reviews

[Relic]

There's nothing wrong with melancholy moods. They help clear the mind for bigger things, especially while stargazing. :)

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I'd take out the commas and revise the second part after the period without the gerund. I think it would sound better.

I search for answers
but only find clues

This is a good poem that highlights your imaginative character.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

The problem aren't the stars, the problem is the sky, which one are we looking at, the one above us or the ones inside? I hope you're seeing the same stars I am. To let you know, they are beautiful on this side.

[Victoria W.]

It's great to keep in mind-- the bigger picture. Which is certainly the sky. :)

[Misterr Remeat]

Pretty awesome!Keep stargazing!

[Victoria W.]

Thank-you. Always and forever. :) x