Not Alice

Inspired by one of my favorite books.

I followed you

into the hole.

Falling, falling

all alone.

You were the rabbit

always rushing

someplace else.

And like the 

Queen of Hearts

always caring only

about yourself.

Why am i supposed

to be Alice ?

Always chasing 

after you.

If all you do is

run and run,

and steal the hearts

of many more.

I'm sorry but I'm tired.

I'm not your Alice anymore.

Reviews

[ANTO]

I like the Alice through the looking glass metaphor - I could definitely see the line "I'm not your Alice anymore." as a great rock or country song title with all that it implies.
Alice learned a lot about herself down the rabbit hole Tannia and you are too judging by this writing - perhaps you are in the rabbit hole of your own Lifetime.
Good work.

[Silent Heart]

Thank you ! Thank you!
I appreciate your comment. And yes i recently have been going through stuff and I learned many new things about myself. I think that's were this poem came from.

[ANTO]

YVW Tannia :)

[Archia]

I loved all the little things that aren't said but implied, especially the chasing after love idea. I think you worked in the 'Alice in Wonderland' elements really well so that it adds a lot more.

[RAOrourke]

I like the twist on Alice, had great flow and description! Great job!

[Silent Heart]

Thank you !

[Lexi Richard]

I really love this, the comparison between love and Alice in Wonderland is phenomenal. Genius and nicely penned!

[Silent Heart]

Thank you ! Thank you !!