if you saw this

If you found this

What would you do?

Would you see my dreams

Would you tell me you love me

If you saw me

What would you say

Would you understand

Would you see I'm so fragile

If you heard me

Where would we be?

Would you hold me

Would you see I'm afraid 

At the bottom of this pit

I'm screaming for these answers

Wanting the world to hear me sing

Wanting to be your everything

But I'm not

And I can't

They won't hear

they won't ask

This song I sing

My everything

Not a single person will ever hear

Not a single person would ever care

In this circle of lies

Of tears

Of hurt

Of loneliness 

I think I will forever hide

I think I will never be seen

I think no one will ever care

I think no one will ever hear my screams

But if someone asked me to sing

If someone took the time 

And if someone wanted everyone to hear

I would love them as mine

Sent from my iPhone

Author's Note

okey doke:) me and my boyfriend are having a write off dont ask how this got started its a loooonnnng story:) (not really but i'm just ot lazy to explain lol) so if you would be so kind as to read this review it and then spam all your writers cafe buddies i would absolutely love you guys!!:) thank you so much:) oh!! before i forget this out of anxiousness to read his piece, could you go to his as well and do the same, his account is sir joseph, and the piece is inquiry:) again thank you for reading:)

Reviews

[SeaBreezes]

Oooh a sweet poem! It was very lovely:)

[marie]

really?:) well i'm glad you think so:) thanks for the review:)

[Ashley G.]

How many write offs have you guys had?

[marie]

just this one, how do you think its going so far?:)

[Ashley G.]

I haven't read his yet...or have I? I don't remember! :(

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Great vulnerability in this.

[marie]

Thank you so much:) I'm glad you liked it:)

[marie]

and as no surprise, Sir Joseph wins:)

[StayAnchored]

I love your poem but honestly I like your boyfriends better... Sorry :(
You did great though! :D

[marie]

Nah:) I know his is better:) it's ok:)

[StayAnchored]

Okie dokey!

[marie]

and as no surprise, Sir Joseph wins

[StayAnchored]

Awesome! But you did amazing too :)

[marie]

Thanks:)

[Ethale Captor]

I have read this poem as well as the poem by Sir Joseph, and I cannot place my favorite. They sound like the same poem from different sides of the spectrum. It is much like a perfect duet, if I may.

My vote is cast, I believe neither should have first nor second. These are two parts of the same work, in my opinion.

[marie]

What's funny is we didn't even plan that:)lol

[Ethale Captor]

As I was told by him as well.

[marie]

Really?:) well what do you say to that?:)lol

[Ethale Captor]

Read the comment string. It is rather humorous.

[marie]

okey doke:)

[marie]

and as no surprise Sir Joseph wins

[Ethale Captor]

He did?

[marie]

Yes he did:)

[Sir Joseph]

Love it! Very moving!:) you basically told me this before then always followed with and thats why i love you as mine:) you are an amazing poet and girl and if people would just hear and see and care like i have and still do, they would be amazed:) great poem marie! You are definitely gonna win lol:)

[marie]

no way i'm gonna win this:) yours was amazing!! it showed so much skill and emotion:) and as for the being amazed, no person will be amazed by this simple minded buffoon:) lol

[Sir Joseph]

Guess im an alien then :P ;) mine is just nonsense and fajita meat lol

[marie]

oh no, your just not anyone your someone:) lol and there is no way yours is meant for fancy tacos!! if that happened the consumer's mouth would explode with mere shock and amazement!!

[Sir Joseph]

Or with health violations.. Lol

[marie]

no way:) five star resturaunts do not create health violation food, especially not you;)

[Sir Joseph]

You say this about the guy you are teaching how to cook and only let me chop and stir ;) lol

[marie]

you can grill!! and that was for a soup you had never even heard of!!:) lol

[Sir Joseph]

Flabbergasting nonsense! Lol

[marie]

horsefeather perfect sense!!! (why are we spouting older words?)

[Sir Joseph]

Not a clue lol:)

[marie]

lol:) well they are rather fun to say:)

[Sir Joseph]

Yep yep yeppers you whipper snapper:)

[marie]

lol awww:)

[Sir Joseph]

Huh? Lol

[marie]

exactly:) lol....the only old word i got left is hog swallow...

[Sir Joseph]

darn oh well we fanagled this enough lol :)