hopeful forgiveness

about four months ago i hurt a friend... hoping that my actions have inspired lasting forgiveness

as i looked into your eyes

your hateful look intensifies

four months its been so

yesterday i let you know

i never wanted to hurt you

i wanted our friendship to be true

this love that between him and i grew

our bond away with the wind blew

i came up and apologized

i hope you realized

my heart aches for the past

a friendship with you that would last

i pray now we start anew

a hug in the hall gives me hope its true

you didn't seem angry

and that set my heart free

please don't let the past between you and me

i miss the joy we had together

i miss the way we used to laugh

i miss the whispers light as a feather

Reviews

[NITHIN PURPLE]

let all statup..let it new......nice

[marie]

thank you:)

[StayAnchored]

I am so glad that you and your friend made up! This is a beautiful heartfelt poem! I love it :D

[marie]

i'm glad as well, four months has been a while, and there are still scars to mend on both our parts, but we both have agreed to new beginnings:)

[quinfinn]

it doesn't get more honest than this. hopefully you will segue into a new friendship with this one. well done!

[marie]

she and i have agreed to new beginnings:) i'm praying it will last:) thank you so much for the review:)

[quinfinn]

you're welcome....and good luck!

[marie]

:)thanks:)

[Nick.B]

Very emotional, and heartbreaking write, hope all will end well between you and your friend, great job

[marie]

it seems to be going well so far:) thanks for the review:)

[Nick.B]

No problem :D

[marie]

:D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

hope it does...it is a sincere write.

[marie]

thank you:) so far she seems to have forgiven me, but... i'm praying