the moon

a little on the spot writing:)

        I saw the moon bright as day.
        It sang to me again.
        It danced with the stars, who did play,
        And said I was a friend
        
        The white man smiled on the waning nights;
        Scaring away little girls frights.
        Who are you? It asked again.
        I tell you the truth, I am a friend.

Author's Note

sorry its bee so long since i've been on... its been kind of hectic lately:) i'll do my best to catch up on here and post plenty of new writings to make up for lost time:)

Reviews

[K writes]

I really enjoyed this write, has insight to it...

[Insight "MH"]

Some people are like the shining moon, so bright, bringing light to the scary night. I love this write, it made me enter a fantasy world. Thank you for sharing.

Insight.

[marie]

I believe everyone has the potential to shine in such a way. True, it's harder to find it in some, but still there all the same. I hope this fantasy world you entered was filled with the faces of such "lights" in your own life! Thank you so much for your kind review.

[Insight "MH"]

It did bring a shine to my face, and you are welcome.

[marie]

I'm so glad it did so:)

[Ashley G.]

I need to catch up on writing too. But we still haven't gotten laptops so I won't be able to post until late afternoon. So to review this one: It's cute and childish but honestly not your best. I like the idea though. Now, when I post something -whenever that may be- it'll probably turn out bad...(Hey, would you look at that!? It's not a one word review!)

[JordanIsaacSmith]

A lovely little poem. I very much enjoyed reading this! I think I understand what it means, but I'm mostly terrible with poems!

[marie]

Thanks i'm glad you liked it!:) and J a poem doesn't have a set meaning each person interprets their own:) that in my opinion is the beauty of poetry:)

[Prritiy]

so sweet, i simply loved the innocence. :)

[marie]

Thank you so much!:)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[marie]

:)

[Nick.B]

Look who's back (yeah! Look who's talking :))) ) anyway great job, interesting portray of the white man

[marie]

Thanks!:) its great to be back:)

[anxia]

I love the moon and the night sky!! You have described it mellifluously :)
Lovely line ' Scaring away little girls frights'

[marie]

Thanks you:)

[Frieda P]

We all seem to be fascinated by the moon, it has a vibrant pull and makes us feel safe, nicely pen'd.

[marie]

thank you:) its great to hear from ya:)

[Amaya Sullivan]

Nice and short sweet poem. Very cute!

[marie]

Thank you soo much:)

[BlueDreams]

Very sweet poem.. :)
thumbs up :)

[marie]

Thank you!:)