the moon

the moon

A Poem by marie
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a little on the spot writing:)

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        I saw the moon bright as day.
        It sang to me again.
        It danced with the stars, who did play,
        And said I was a friend
        
        The white man smiled on the waning nights;
        Scaring away little girls frights.
        Who are you? It asked again.
        I tell you the truth, I am a friend.

© 2015 marie


Author's Note

marie
sorry its bee so long since i've been on... its been kind of hectic lately:) i'll do my best to catch up on here and post plenty of new writings to make up for lost time:)

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This is such a nice poem!
I've missed you on here but I totally understand how hectic life can be :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


marie

12 Years Ago

Thank you!:) glad to be back:) missed you guys:)
i love the moon. this is a great write. interested me and your title pulled me in.

~ noodle.

Posted 12 Years Ago


marie

12 Years Ago

thanks for the review:) glad you liked it:)
i think the moon is definitely a friend...the Wolfman didn't like seeing him...but the rest of us are friends with the man in the moon...
i like this write, it is comforting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


marie

12 Years Ago

thank you for the review!:) I'm glad you liked it:) its nice to hear from you again:) sorry I've bee.. read more

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Added on July 1, 2013
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I have been away from this site for a while, hoping to get back into the swing of things. I recently turned 18 and have rediscovered my muse. If you wish to befriend me, please constructively review m.. more..