Sweet Servitude

There's Heaven in her smile.
He sees it.
He seeks it.
And when she lets him,
He drowns in it.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like the poetic minimalism. I'm not certain I should like to "drown" in any experience. Bathe in it perhaps, but not drown. I understand the total immersion of baptism... the Christian rebirth. But to drown has rather negative connotations for me. I'm of the opinion that love, like truth, sets us free; rather than making us slaves unable to breathe. But thank you for a thought invoking read.

[sonnie ibadah]

Thank you for the insightful review.

[Weeping willow]

Beautifully expressed, when you can take few words to paint a nice picture, that is art ;-]

[sonnie ibadah]

Thank you for your kind review :)

[Dave Brown]

He sounds a bit like a puppet on a string but apparently a well rewarded puppet
some strings can be very tempting

[sonnie ibadah]

Lol! I love the analogy. Thanks Dave.

[Katrina Mckeown]

A delightful love poem well penned. “Heavenly to read and drown in. :) glad I stopped by :)

[sonnie ibadah]

Thank you Katrina :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Ahh this is beautiful really !!!!

[sonnie ibadah]

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Julie :)

[Paul Bell]

The weaker sex, don't believe it.
Great way to drown mind you, and they do say you recall everything when you drown.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words and thoughts. No wasted words written. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[sonnie ibadah]

Thank you for your beautiful review Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[AJNJ]

Will she let him die then? :)
Enjoyed this simple and beautiful poem.

[sonnie ibadah]

Thanks buddy :)

[AJNJ]

Your welcome buddy 🤗

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This is romantically lovable!
Few words that describes it all.
Love is love, don't hold it back once you feel it. Let it be made known to that person and from there, your life will feel blessed.

Great work, Sonnie.

[sonnie ibadah]

Thak you Kay, glad you liked it :)