The Stars are Alive

A night with the special someone

When the stars shine down
and strike your face
you've never been more beautiful.
You shine.
You glow.
The stars are alive inside you.
Dancing.
Twirling.
Swirling.
Till the night ends and they are no more.
But tonight, I promise, my love,
that the stars will come back and
you will light up the world.

Reviews

[Alejandra Marie]

I love the connection of love and light. Both very filling and bright. I also enjoy your use of descriptive language. It's nicely written and has a beautiful flow. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Gamitsuki]

Again the magic is done......Very Well written poem.....TrUlY..!!

[Falling Stars]

This is a really beautiful piece of writing. It captures love and exhilaration. I love how you list multiple descriptive words, and how your poem is teeming with light and tangible love. Thanks for sharing this!

[Petrichor]

Thank you so much!!