~ Green Flash ~

A deceitful hope or real illusion

Streaks of azure sky,
Mirror itself in the ocean by..
As the world bathes in the;
Golden glint of the sun
There is darkness for none..

The clouds float around
Pale blue lightening
Of the sinking sun..
A green flash shoots up
In the dusking sky!
Kissing the lowest peak
A sorrowful goodbye!
Is it just the stark truth
Clothed deceptively in
An hopeful illusion??
Or just a figment of imagination??

Vast landscape of unending droplets.
Reflecting the cold grey cirrus,
Is washed over by a shadowy blaze..

Before the night is bare,
Sun showers her last rays...
Moon rains her infant beams....
As heaven overflows....
A state of divine rapture,
Which was unknown is found;
As two yearning souls
Merge together,
Finding their own..

Rediscovering their banished emotions...
In their blissful imagination...

Author's Note

Sorry i have not been able to post recently. So here it is the sequel of Darkness unveiled.The two souls meet virtually. Hope you enjoy it.

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

Again you have blown me out of the water with your imagery, I love how you wield your words with so much grace.

Before the night is bare,
Sun showers her last rays...
Moon rains her infant beams....
As heaven overflows....
A state of divine rapture

My favorite lines. They overflow with imagery and elegance. Beautiful work.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow.. thank you Ashira. I am humbled.looking forward to reviewing your works too.:)

[Ashira Macy]

No problem at all, you have a wonderful, unique style that I am excited to experience!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Same here.. can't wait to check out more of your works :)

[Frieda P]

Smashing imagery here Sophy, it's like a gentle rain with thunder bolts meeting in time and space...I guess that's what a 'real illusion' looks like, two souls crashing together in perfect harmony.

[Sophy Freebirds]

You've nailed it in the head Freida..You've perceived the message accurately. Delighted you liked it.

[Frieda P]

Wow, and this early in the morning...ha must be the coffee. :) Love it, my pleasure..

[Sophy Freebirds]

Coffee is brain energizer for you,i guess.. ;) kidding. Thanks again

[Frieda P]

Like lifeblood Sophy. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

O my!! Thank god i ain't addicted to it. Enjoy your weekend. :)

[Frieda P]

Smart cookie...! Enjoy your weekend too. :)

[zainul]

Very imaginative work.
Enjoyed depiction of natural elements.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I am glad you liked it.

[zainul]

My pleasure,lovely poet.:)

[Dilan Gunawardana]

Hi Sophy, I really enjoyed this elegant piece of prose writing. I can feel all of the colours in the surreal sky that you described. Well done :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you Dilan.Delighted you liked it. :)

[Tom]

A visually descriptive meeting of that alluring, almost mystical time, as the fading embers of the day are transformed into the moonlit shadows of the night!

Wonderfully imaginative and creatively penned!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow.. thank you for your thoughtful words. :)

[anne]

Beautiful words.....moon rains her infant beams...lovely...light and dark are mingling passing through beautiful description of thoughts and words.....wow.......

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you Anne :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's one way to meet, virtually...

the darkness meeting the light...

but here it feels like the dark suddenly rises and tries to distinguish the light, but the love between the two is too strong..
passionate poem...the love strikes like lightning.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow. Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words.. :)