~Aurora of Perceptions~

~Aurora of Perceptions~

A Poem by Sophy Freebirds
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Charged thoughts,magnetic muse....

"
In this massive stretch of cold land...
My wandering charged thoughts...
Attracted to magnetic imbued muse...

Followed by a luminous bath
In my stark polar life...
Blending in the gloomy sky...
With the amalgation of...
Sparkling golden and inky blue...

Giving my pen a soothing hue..
Culminating it with crowning dew...

© 2014 Sophy Freebirds


Author's Note

Sophy Freebirds
Just a different interpretation of poetry.According to me it is my refuge. hope you Aurora.. :)

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I wish my muse was more magnetic haha But what an eloquent and profound way to profess a poet's connection to their art...you always have a unique way of looking at things Sophy :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

11 Years Ago

So do you K.K.. ;) thank you so much dear poet.. it was supermagnetic.. ha
What a wonderful embodiment of poetic inspiration. I loved the descriptive colors and the picture you painted was simply gorgeous. I also thought the ending couplet at the end was a really nice touch, giving your poem some vivid closure. Great work dear!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

11 Years Ago

Ohh wow.. thank you for your kind words dear :)
Definitely a poet's poem....your muse was supercharged here no doubt. I love the color references and the cold to dark, stark feel, back to warm hues of your inky crowning glorious words....not crazy about all the points of ellipsis, I think it takes away from your brilliant words. That's just me... Another stunner Sophy!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

11 Years Ago

Awww n***a. Thank you so much :)
Amazing description and photo. I would love to go to Alaska and see the Aurora. The photos I have seen are beautiful. I like how you used the Aurora to create vision and thoughts. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

11 Years Ago

Same here.. the unfulfilled wish.. thank you coyote :)
wow...loved reading it...a beautiful description...just stopped for reading this one.....wow...loved reading it...a beautiful description...just stopped for reading this one.....
Followed by a ...........blue....amazing...
Giving........................dew....energetic.
You are always superb with your work.... :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Sophy Freebirds

11 Years Ago

Wow.. Anne.i am humbled.. thank you sweetie :)

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Sophy Freebirds
Sophy Freebirds

Balangir, Odisha, India



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Christened as Sophy i try to live up to this name.Introduction is something i am never good at.But if you want to know me,read me. My Real name is Ankita Sagar.Will be turning 19 soon this Septembe.. more..