~Mystic Eclipse...

Soft moonbeams filtering through the dark canopy...
Dancing to the darkling's melodious tune...
She moves accompanied by shimmering white hue..
With dark hair synonymous to the night...
Captivating sloe eyes dance with moon so bright...

Carried by the delicate pale rays...
Forming wings in a dreamy haze..
Chilly night air blows her silk cream dress..
Touching her cold moon...
She forgets the sun in noon
Carressing and savouring his soft pale skin
Accepting him with every blemish

Earth accuses her of eclipsing shadow...
She sadly smiles and leaves the divine crescendo...
Gently whispering to the harmonic wind...
"Shadows are formed when light is akin"

Flying across the massive cosmic sky...
She nods as she passes stars of Ara by...

Author's Note

Here "ARA-THE STARS OF SACRIFICE",Zeus made this stars when his allies offered him sacrifice by creating an Altar to pledge their alliegance during Titan war.. This poem is symbolically penned.. :) Enjoy....

Reviews

[Frieda P]

There's a blue-white hue emitting light from your constellation here Sophy, without even knowing
the story behind this one it's quite an appealing read....your offering is magically splendid!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you for getting the right message here Freida- offering. Thanks so much cutie.. nice dp huh?? :)

[Frieda P]

Yay I got it, and that was on only two cuppas of coffee. ;)

[Somenath Nag]

It's really rhythmic..... The recurrent image of darkness seems to create a sense of mysticism.... I feel ..It seems I am dreaming while reading this wonderful piece .... Really liked the poem ....Thanks for sharing...

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you dear poet :)

[raj24]

this one was beautiful.. i was imagining a girl dancing with open hairs..and arms wide open like her winds..this was magical and a beautiful picture..loved it....thanks for sharing :)

Raj

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much dear poet :)

[Symphonic_Sunflowers]

I felt enchanted reading this.
I could imagine as though the wind were whispering it to me.
This was a fantastic poem, keep up the amazing work
- Chloe

[Sophy Freebirds]

Awww.. thank you amigo. I will be reviewing your work too.. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such a magically romantic poem… so very creative in expressing the emotions of loyalty and passion…

I really love this part

Touching her cold moon...
She forgets the sun in noon
Carressing and savouring his soft pale skin
Accepting him with every blemish

[Sophy Freebirds]

Instinct told me you would like it for sure :) Thank you Amigo Dale...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Instincts are our highest form of education and should never be ignored.

[kublakhan27]

Dark hair synonymous to the night...your ability to turn a phrase is something I seriously look up to my friend, not to mention your seemingly endless well of knowledge...your work is deep and intellectual yet universal and relateable...and as I've said before, I'm always spellbound by your knack for cosmic imagery...my library function doesn't work but this would be in it without question...awesome :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

I am doing tribal dance here.. geee!! Thank you so much Steve for your lovely words ;)

[kublakhan27]

You're most welcome Sophy ;)

[TheLastEclipse]

It is very beautiful to say the least. Your words, to me, transcend in a way that is almost melodic to the eyes. I approve. Good job! Good job, madam.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww.. thank you so much dear poet :)

[TheLastEclipse]

I hate to ask, but would you review one of mine??

[Ashira Macy]

How lovely! The imagery in this is so vivid, it pulled me in, and I love that you went and used Greek mythology, that is always a fun little twist to experience. And I didn't know about the stars of Ara, so you mystified me and taught me something new. Well done darling!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh wow!! Thank you sweetie ;)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh wow!! Thank you sweetie ;)

[Cory Barrett]

wonderfully penned in the image of elegance.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much for your kind words ;)

[anne]

Wow...this was beautiful....each line tugging at heart.....I like use of words so beautifully.... :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Glad to see you in my page Anne :) thank you dear amiga

[anne]

pleasure is all mine to read such beautiful work..:))