Soft Darkness

The dust of age lays on our souls

a crumbling page, dying coals

An ashened ember glows and dies

an image remembered in our eyes

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

very interesting read and write, enjoyed this

[Soren]

Thank you for reviewing my poem and for your comment

[Lathen Griffiths]

‘An ashened ember glows and dies’ I really enjoyed this, an interesting and enjoyable read.

Lathen

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

I really enjoyed this write,
I think this is wonderful

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Death holds these qualities. I'm reminded of my father's last breath. The last spark of warmth in his hand that I held. It is a memory that will always stay with me. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

[Soren]

Thank you for commenting. I appreciate your review