You see what you want

Over you

completely

Infatuated

with another

I don't care

about you

I think a lot

Reviews

[ProphetsMother]

Sounds like you DO care.. funny how someone has to spend the energy and time to say they don't care which only shows that they do. It's a hurt way to showing how we feel.

[Soren]

Thanks for the read. This was written without punctuation so that if you read it more than once it can be taken more than one way

[John the Baptist]

Something about the last line makes me doubt the full sincerity of the previous ones.

[Soren]

Purposely worded in an ambiguous manner if you read differently it reads the opposite. Thanks for the read and noting the ambiguity.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the thoughts and the final thought. We do think too much Soren. Very nice dance of words my friend.
Coyote

[Soren]

Thanks friend I appreciate your review and comments without punctuation things can be taken more than one way and often are.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Einstein Noodle]

succinct and pointed my friend .. your closing line killed me! it is so point blank it is a bit humorous to me .. but i have been infatuated on steroids and the ups and downs of love are clearly outlined in your winsome poetic capsule .. minimalism to the max .. well done says i! well done indeed
E.
ps. again .. love your last line!! cracks me up

[Soren]

Yes my friend without punctuation things can be taken several ways. thanks so much for the review.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .........................