Good taste

Sharks don’t bite in the night, my neighbor said to me

But he was wrong and didn’t live long, while fishing out at sea

By the pale moon light he got a bite, half way up to his knee

He started to shout and thrash about, he complained about his loss

He turned bright red as the sharks said: "What a wonderful sauce"

Then the sharks took him up to his chin and used his laces for dental floss

Reviews

[Beren]

No no no. This is so dark, did I laugh though? Well, I guess admitting that doesn't make me a scary person. I love how you always create a different perspective in your poems. And I loved this poem because it made me think about how pointless advices are.
I have to stop smiling anymore...

[Soren]

I love dark humor and find it accompanies well the ironies of life. Thank you so much for the read and your comments are always most valued

[Ashi written tale & poe..]

While reading, there is a smile on my face, a good one.

[Soren]

Thank you so much for the read and comment. If I got a smile that it was worth it.

[MCS]

A little dark and twisted, but I couldn’t help chuckling while I read. :)

[Soren]

Dark humor looked down on by some I see as the balance in the universe and it seems that the universe enjoys its dark humor as well. Thanks for the read and comment it is always most appreciated

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Morbidly hilarious!...........And in very bad taste, which I love.

[Soren]

Thanks so much Jacob for the read and comment a little dark meat with the white is a good mix.