Words of an old man

Words of an old man

A Poem by Soren

Looks like its's gonna pour, paint peels ya might wanna close dat door
Der's a draft, did ya ear? Somethin's queer, think the wind laughed 
Ah never mind, wisht ah could unwind dis button thread, pay na attention ta what ah said
Let's have somethin ta eat come on put up yer feet, nutin like biscuits an gravy yer brother just got back from the navy.  Dead ya said? Naw Ma an Jack are nappin out back. Could ya close dat door?

© 2025 Soren


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Nice creation of dialect here.
As we get older and not so with it, there are many things we just can't or won't accept, even though they are reality.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Soren

7 Months Ago

Thank you Jacob reality is only what we and others agree upon and when others are less important tha.. read more

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