Habit or addiction

Habit or addiction

A Poem by Soren

A habit not a vice, salt as a spice
A glass of wine with a meal, brings out the flavor of the veal
Cup of coffee to open eye's squint or with an after dinner mint
A cigar with friends, a prayer as day ends

Over a vice one has no control, avoiding withdrawal is its goal
Then what of water or food, they're a vice one must conclude
No, a vice is not good for you, something you must eschew
But what if coffee and cigars friends impart, isn't wine good for the heart? 

© 2025 Soren


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Coffee or cigars or wine are good to certain limit, just once in a while. But overdoses are not just addiction, they damage your parts.

I still want to say a honey bee bits with more pain, but it doesn't hurt 🌺 it just loves flower and both mutually enjoy the relationship of love.

I don't know whether my lines make sense even now atleat

I am liking your writings you write it is query and pose philosophy and ethical thoughts.
I saw how john the Baptist and Jacob writings are...

You are natural writer facing so many issues and you express because you are facing them dissimilar to shakespeare where he created the situations to explode his mental abilities to write poetry and prose
You must be great writer but you just write of only your life. But he helped people of different thoughts to face life
And you are self oriented. But everyone can apply to their life and see helping hand in your writings to make life happier.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts without blocking me

Jessy Jacob ❤️

Posted 7 Months Ago


Soren

7 Months Ago

It is I that thank you and your most generous words of praise they are most welcome. I don't believe.. read more

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