Thunder from the throne

They knocked down the pearly gates to put in a tole way

The poor it negates, only those that can pay are welcome to stay

Heaven had a revolution, they elected a new God

They drafted a new constitution, to give democracy a nod

Equal opportunity for damned souls, move them to the front of the line

Expanding heaven's borders a new God extols,  violators of tariffs he'll fine

They are tearing up the clouds to put in a parking lot

Asphalt enshrouds every historical rainbowed spot

Hell on the other hand has air conditioning

Here no one is banned no auditioning

Free internet with no ads naked girls and lads, every one's got a hot spot

Lots of beer we'll party all year letting heaven rot

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I enjoyed the humour here. You have to laugh in this ever mad world of ours. It is a coping strategy. Yep, hell is looking much better these days. Have a great week Soren.

Chris

[Soren]

Thanks Chris I appreciate your encouragement and kind words.

[John the Baptist]

I've been enduring a heat wave for the last week. Hell doesn't sound half bad.

[Soren]

Thanks John for the read and kind words that are always supportive and so appreciated

[laika]

as someone critical of the modern states of both america and christianity, this resonates deeply, and the tone switch twinge of comedy at the end ties it all together brilliantly, while mirroring the absurdity of our world right now. bravo. let's let heaven rot together, friend!

[Soren]

Thank you for your read and interpretation it is deeply appreciated