Let it go

Let it go

A Poem by Soren

Blame a deceitful game to ascribe shame to other than our own name
A defense at another's expense demanding recompence for the offence
When tis we that should see the travesty of our own responsibility
Judge not they say, think not to repay but let decay words another did say
Expect no satisfactions for their actions, no retractions for infractions
Let there be no condemnation, without vindication there is liberation and self salvation 

© 2025 Soren


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A brilliant psychological poem. Enjoyed reading

Posted 4 Months Ago


Soren

4 Months Ago

Than you so much Arundass for your read and most kind words of support they are as always most appre.. read more
Hi Soren,
I agree to your point, salvation definitely is a kind of execution.
I am in dreams of my next birth I don't know but when, this never ending desire I feel what you are thinking is right. I don't have any unfulfilled desires that I need to live and sustain life but I do owe something to my man's family hope it gets finished in this life if not in next life ..
No one knows where we fall but if we dream what we need we definitely know the way, for few smart brains they hook or crook but definitely try so much when the real target is no more I don't understand this but this must be their salvation in a kind of win to them..
I have seen him I have seen his family I talked to him and family too I have also touched him by him ... The only desire I had is to touch his heart ❤️, ... This is keeping me to have a desire to live with and also to reborn for him...
I do write about people rather toys, because toys don't hav life to reply back in response or way to react but people feel respond and be responsible too.
Jessy Jacob

Posted 4 Months Ago


Soren

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your review and words of encouragement they are most appreciated
Splendid use of interior rhymes in this one, as well as a potent moral guide. I would suggest you send a copy to Mr. Trump, but he wouldn't have the first idea of what you're talking about.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Soren

4 Months Ago

Wasted time he would put a tariff on it and declare it un-American wanting to deport it. Thanks John.. read more
Tremendous work, my friend.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Soren

4 Months Ago

Thank you Thomas for the review and kind words they are always appreciated
That was like a game of thrones episode. I was expecting an execution at the end.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Soren

4 Months Ago

Thank you for the review and comment it is most appreciated

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