Avodcado

Avodcado

A Poem by Soren

Love a fruit begins at the root if planted in good ground
Sprouts a shoot at first minute growing straight where sunlight's found
Watered with time it will climb and with leaves in green abound
It will die left to dry or with too much water will drown

An avocado tree pollinated by bee birthed fruits around
To pick when green is routine, leaving ripe on tree is unsound
Eaten by bugs, taken by thugs, pecked by birds by squirrels downed
Let it safely mature where it's secure, virgin flavor expound

Unripened fruit is hard but don't discard, with peel soon browned
Softening such will yield to touch, removing the shell that does surround
Inside a seed that when freed a new tree will breed, healthy and sound
A cycle sweet now complete, nature's perfection found

© 2025 Soren


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Hi Soren,

People break hearts as if like skin removal. I never cheated any including God, but people felt true about me and my sacrifice for them to keep safe, but in this process I did hurt my family and the thing it cursed me back my life to be a cage....

Atleast people lived with joy in my love, it doesn't matter whether the person come back or never return.. this is just small life but life on earth is since manyillion years.

People surrounding us are there is debt to be paid and I think I returned their debts with interest .
I have to think whether I loved myself anytime because people loved me and that was more for me ...
I know people come and take shelter under tree...
I do have man and he is hiding I need to look for one who is mine .. people say who doesn't have any God is there for them..

I see my man in God, God will come to me to take me to his home ..it what it is i will let you know soren ..
I don't react to every sarcasm because the weak and cheaters play sarcasm blame. It is just needed to check one rice grain in cooking bowl is enough to whether rice is cooked or uncooked no need to check every cell of her body what she is . I am not worried about me never because I am dead to everyone but living with breath lifee to me is consciousness with consciousness..
If you need any help let me know...



Posted 4 Months Ago


Soren

4 Months Ago

Thank you Jessy for the review and remarks
I am very fond of avocados Soren. Love the taste and texture. The flesh can’t be exposed too long though before it loses its beautiful colour. I have three avocado stones. I have never planted them before, but they are in my greenhouse and following my success at planting pine seeds, I’m going to give it a try. So satisfying to grow from seed. Speaks to me of nurture and nature. Have a beautiful day.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


Soren

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much Chris thought of this planting and growing of an avocado tree when was a child in .. read more

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Added on August 27, 2025
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