What we hold inside

Raw emotion pours as honey flowing quicker under heat of sun

Its sweet, burns when hot, sticking to skin, scalding within when done

Cooled it is sealed in wax, future fuel fiercely protected in hive hidden 

To be taken by only friend with out sting, all others access forbidden

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Wow Soren, very deep, personal and full of emotions, lovely metaphors to portray sensuality... love the vivid words... nice piece!
Warmly, B

[Soren]

Thank you so much Betty for the read and kind words of support they are always most appreciated

[Kady R.]

Hiii Soreennn,

Ahhhh who can contain the vastness of emotions. Its like trying to grasp for the wind. But I like how you relate emotions with honey. Gave me a different perspective on things.

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your read and reflection it is most appreciated

[Kady R.]

Anytimmmee🤗🤗🤗

[John the Baptist]

A wise observation nicely rhymed here. Raw emotion, especially in the youthful, can be the source of enthusiasm, but can manipulated by sinister sources. Think Nazi brownshirts. Given time to simmer, however, that emotion can be used to make wise choices. Think gut feeling.

[Soren]

Thank you so much John for the read and comment it is deeply appreciated my friend