And it rained

The grey of a new day, clouds hang as shrouds

And it rains

Billowing bellies full, vast piles of dingy wool

And it rains

Rivers overflow their banks, rivulet armies attack their flanks

And it rains

Invading forces fill fields, leaf shield to droplet shell soon yields

And it rains

Surrounded on all sides, hope buried under mud hides 

And it rains

Darkness is settling in, God where have you been

And it rains

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Love the alliteration...repitition of sounds that fits with the repetition we hear
from a certain leader...Full of "dingy wool"---
sorry, my mind is just preoccupied with politics....they hang over me..."as shrouds" as you put it.
j.

[Soren]

Thank you Jacob for the review and comment Your support is most important to me and your words most valued my friend

[Ken Simm.]

This works Soren. Such excellent use of descriptive words. I like it.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Ken for the read and kind words of support they are deeply appreciated

[Coyote Poetry]

The world needs more kindness and less greed. Powerful dance of strong thoughts. Thank you, Soren for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Soren]

Thank you Coyote for the read and for your words of encouragement they are most important and valued