Second bow

Dizzy on life's treasures in a cloud of dissolving pleasures a rainbow falls

Teetering in a daze, life passes in a haze, act over curtain calls

Climbing an arc of hues, billows obscure my views, although the play is over

The audience all gone home, I am left to roam life's stage a rover

Reviews

[lizzie]

Hi! Your story was a pleasure to read the emotions feel authentic, and the flow is beautifully balanced. As an artist, I couldn’t help imagining it in comic form.
I’m a commission-based comic/webtoon artist. If you’d like to discuss possibilities, I’d love to chat.
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