We are all one

From birth molded atoms of the earth we are

Some from a distant star some a dead tzar 

From life to life a series of dreams

On currents of time, carried as light beams

Atoms shed from bodies of the dead

Calcium from bones, iron from blood red

Shared atoms from all the past

The first living cell down to the last

Once part of Cezar, another part of a slave

we are a part of Jesus resurrected from his grave

Reviews

[Michael Sun Bear]

Very nicely done. A mix of physics, chemistry, astronomy, history, mysticism all nicely tied together, in rhythm and rhyme nonetheless, all carrying a deep message of humanity. I really like this.

[Soren]

Thank you Michael for your read and comment yes even physics, chemistry, astronomy, history and mysticism are related just different ways of seeing things. Your words are most appreciated

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work. Timeless and powerful.

[Soren]

Thank you Thomas for the review it is deeply appreciated

[Chris Shaw]

We are all flesh, blood and bones. We should be united by what is common to us, and there are many shared things, but unfortunately the differences which cause such division are the ones that tear our world apart and cause such conflict. Your words also reminded me how small we all are in the overall picture. A thoughtful write Soren, I travelled to many places with your poem. Have a lovely day.

Chris

[Soren]

Thank you so much Chris for your review and interpretation it is deeply valued yes indeed we are all built of the same star dust and we share its atoms trading them constantly