Religion or science

Religion or science

A Poem by Soren

Cast in a pit, blasphemous words spit, an outcast
Scapegoat in a game of judgmental shame, crippled mind a body did outlast
Leather bands secure the hands of a man pronounced possessed
While in life's fever dream he did scream of visions that others distressed
A body convulsed, viewers repulsed, twisted words not understood
With a sharp stone chipped a hole in his skull's bone, releasing spirts for his good
Hear him shout as they come flying out, with blood evil spirits released
Making sure he received religion's cure, if not, better he be deceased 
Today instead of a rock we let people talk until they break the rule
Then deeming them ill give them a pill a pharmaceutical magic jewel
Those that defy we electrify or sever their brain with a shiny steel tool 
Now the walking dead, chained to a bed where they sit and drool
Some say it's better this way, science's treatment more humane
Have we come far to get where we are in treating the insane

© 2026 Soren


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A sobering read Soren on broken minds. These days I put my faith in science, but a quiet prayer helps too. Not an easy fix for the sufferers, often tormented by their thoughts.

Chris

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Soren

6 Hours Ago

Thank you so much for your read Chris yes science we see as more humane although religion is the one.. read more
As a person with schizophrenia.... yikes. The fine line between spiritual experience and... delusion. To think you've seen such a thing as visions once, but understand it's some trick of the brain chemicals. Or is it? A thoroughly humbling mystery. I am very fortunate to have responded well to my little pharmaceutical magic tricks, not quite a zombie these days, though I have been, and know too many who remain so. It's a horribly imperfect solution. The fact that science takes as much faith as religion, and often seems as crude. What is cutting edge today will be archaic and offensive tomorrow. But anyways. Nicely done.

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Soren

6 Hours Ago

Thank you so much for your words of wisdom and experience. You hold views so close to mine and havin.. read more

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Added on April 9, 2026
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