Night's bedroom

Cascading transparent sheets of rain leave a grey stain on the hills

Shadows muted, greens diluted, mist over them spills

Grass cries as light dies running into muddied pools

Lachrymose drips a bough grips, dropping liquid jewels

Muffled song of birds, blurred all human words, everything fades

Stillness of breath in day's death as sky pulls down the shades

Reviews

[Brandon Houser]

This is amazing.
Such visions it conjures
Great rhythm. Such excellence to wake up to. Thank you for sharing.

[Soren]

Thank you Brandon for the read and most generous words of support they are most valued

[Chris Shaw]

Some incredibly imaginative imagery here. You really create the mood of a constant downpour and your words stimulate the senses, sound, sight and touch. A wet and even wetter dark day painting. Fine description Soren.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Chris for your read and kind words of encouragement they are most valued