Broken Heart

My heart is broken in two

I miss hearing you say "I love you"

Its hard to see you with another girl

When you were there you were my world

you held my heart in your hands

you were more then just a one minute man

we would talk for hours at a time

you said I was your year 'round valentine

Now you are gone and I'm alone

I can't believe youve reaped wat i have sown

Reviews

[xxCrashingxx]

i tlike this one to lol. keep writing

[WhoaitSarah]

I love this. It sounds like something I would write.
:)

[Tina-Sue]

I liked this.
I thought there was a lot of emotion here, even if it appears to be short or simple at first glance.