He and She

She cries

Drip..

Drip..

Drop..

Tears fall..

Onto soft skin of her cheeks.

 

He speaks

Softly..

Softly..

Spoken..

Words fall...

Out of his mouth which flow to her heart.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

For "A womans tears" Contest

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

How simple and yet effective, very well written and thoughtfully remastered, I feel you planned it beautifully.

[highthought]

Words fall...

Out of his mouth which flow to her heart.

nice line. wished if i you ended first part with a line like that

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

:) sweet

[J.S. Pua]

nice simple write..
good job..

[Lighthouse Call]

Let me just say, that this touched my emotions really really deeply. Its 4:15AM, and I can't close an eye with another. Its really good. So many thoughts on my head. God don't mind the effect of the alcohol... Lol.
Its beautiful. You're an amazing writer. keep writing. I need to read meaningful things.

[KaySea]

very nice. beautiful

[dreamer :)]

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I CAN TOTALLY RELATE! ONE OF THE BEST PIECES I HAVE EVER READ ON HERE! IT JUST SAYS SO MUCH!!! YOU WILL WIN THE CONTEST< HANDS DOWN!!!!