Gelatin

I cannot get rid of

this empty feeling

it's as if I took

a tablespoon in my hand

and hollowed myself out

like a past-ripe cantaloupe 

Time is like off-brand gelatin

and I gobble it up

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Perfectly capturing the feeling of emptiness. The hollow ache that something is amiss, but what? This has a really nice feel to it, the words used and the way it almost demands the reader to read it slowly and in hushed tones. Thank you for sharing.