Moving

I have just found out I might be moving, and if we were actually busting out the moving vans, this is how I would feel.

Moving

I was so tired of what's here

I never bothered to think

of what would tire me there

when they finally agreed

to answer my begs and pleads...

I found myself crying in the night

missing the lamppost that stood by our porch

missing the cat that would wander the block

missing the friends that were always there

missing the things I would never see again

missing the things...

that I had willingly given.

Author's Note

What do you think? plz comment below.

Reviews

[1Disawsum]

it's true, isn't it? Moving can mean a new chapter in your life is happening, but it can also mean that all the things you're used to, they're gone. But once the move is done, what else can you do but try to appreciate your surroundings? Go explore your new place, go discover new things. Find your new comfort spot. Enjoy life as it comes and goes, for one day, you'll leave again soon. xxx

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[Valkyrie Warrior]

This is just beautiful!!!!!
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[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Moving is always a change. Action and reaction. You never know what will become of it. Maybe all goes well but sometimes there are regrets. I loved this little poem. :) Rudi

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[DoormanDan]

Moving can be both exciting and sad. Exciting because you get the chance to basically start a whole new adventure, but sad because you have to leave behind people you hold dear to your heart. I can relate to this poem because I've had to move ALOT in my life. The poem itself was brilliantly well written and beautiful. Good job!

[Rob Santana]

Moving sucks!! I used to do it all the time when I was young. Went to so many different schools. It just sucks, period. I feel this one, brings back stressful memories.