Love lust or both

four letter words that are confusing me a lot ever since i met you.. is the feeling for real or it just lust for all i know you are taken....

I shouldn’t have kissed you for the first time or the second & defiantly not

the third or countless times that followed.

For you are something borrowed

Never to be mine or be by my side

But to you I can do anything that goes in my mind

 

Whenever we touch I feel a rush

It more of a spark or just a mere crush

Something that feels so deep

And you if you let me, you i might keep

 

I ask you today is it love or is it lust

For my heart & mind I can’t trust

Because as far as I know it is tender & soft like a dove

That the few words that i can say about love

 

This might not last long

But for now I feel like I am exactly where I belong

Sometimes I wonder what I will do without you

For I am scared and I don’t have a clue

 

I don’t want to conclude for this is either lust or love

Just the same as an eagle or a dove

One exciting,tempting,sensational & yet harmful

And the other tender,gentle, warm & beautiful.

Reviews

[Nirvana]

AH the battle between flesh and feeling! I really enjoyed how you captured both emotions beautifully in each stanza. "For my heart & mind I can't trust" is such a real statement. We're always conflicted between reason (this is just a pleasure for us) and hope (could they possibly feel more than just desire). Excellent!

[Dash the Reaper]

its very hard to distinguish between the two, thanks for the review

[jesserose99]

This is really beautiful Dash. a passionate encountenter...and I love the way you juxtapose love and lust at the end...with the eagle and the dove and the last two lines. Really well written.

[Lydia Shutter]

No one can predict the future. Enjoying the moment and waiting to see what happens next is the way to go. Nice write. Lydi**

[cycy]

This might not last long
But for now I feel like I am exactly where I belong

i loved it hun, well written :)

[Dash the Reaper]

thanks for the review luv

[KWP]

don't question every moment - instead perhaps enjoy the flow - wherever it may lead X