WANTON

my feelings for you,the puzzle that is unsolvable..

The old lady tried to reach for the berry but to no avail

The closer she got, the more impossible it seemed to reach it

I schooled myself that day, after all the greatest teacher is oneself

Wanting something you can’t have will certainly drive you nuts

 

When the war was over as we matched home, a dove flew by

All I remember is appreciation, beauty & the toxic smile

As the creature went away the whole battalion stood still like statues

Never look twice like others or else you will fall in love & become stone too

 

One rainy day the heavy drops poured on me

I stood in the cold shower enjoying the moment while it lasted

The wetter I got the more I enjoyed, I cursed the clouds when the rain stopped

Don’t ever want something that bad the passing old man said

The day I saw you I forgot all the wise moments above

A rock sculptured by a blind man, a bit rough but close to perfection

I can control my mind but certainly not my heart & soul

The heart wants what it wants that’s what everyone concluded

I blame Adam he was the first to be blinded by Eve

Like Father like son they say, I proudly let my self fall for you

I now believe he wasn’t tempted, maybe he ate the fruit willingly 

I know because I am in that same position, I can’t choose between right & wrong

 

You are the berry so far up the tree i cant reach

the dove that many suitors wish to cage in their hearts for ever

The cold shower i never want to end

I chose to stay silent but deep down you should be mine

Even if you are taken,i will never stop feeling this way.

Author's Note

p:s i wanted this to be more like a puzzle each piece with its own part in the whole body,at the end of the poem i hope you will all get what i was trying to do...

Reviews

[Cocopuffles123]

You were very poetic, it just was more like a puzzle that you don't have the box for than a stream, but it was still very beautiful,if not confusing.

[Dash the Reaper]

thanks for the review,

[Cocopuffles123]

Anytime! I love it really.