What We Do

Her eyes blurry blue

And sinking below

Eye level.

Some where your

Flying into a memory.

I wish to follow

Deep inside you mind.

I seek the golden

Heart

That you have taken with

With cold fingers.

I want to crawl

Into your arms

A sleep as if I were

A kitten.

Loving you

Is hard

Only threw the drug

Do we talk openly

We get high

So high

That we’re gone

From the world

Reviews

[Cristina]

My only question is... are there grammatical errors in this, or am I just not really catching the sublte impressions your trying to make by using the words you used? Otherwise, I enjoyed the poem. I thought it was revealing, yet a little hessitant to reveal too much. I also thought it was delicate and innocent in the beginning, and then quite blunt at the end, giving it a very realistic approach to how people do the things they do. There are things we desire and strive for, but in the end, we must do what we must do if we truly want something.