Messing With Some Words

we're all mixed up in this crazy
game.
so lost that we're willing to give up everything just for one
thing.
fighting for all the wrong reasons.
hiding for the right.
why must we play this games
with our souls?
a part of us was left with them-
dying with them.

We're trying

so hard just to  comprehend

everything that went wrong.

must it be this hard

to get by

in this life?

They are all i see

but there must be more to them

than i know.

they hide behind their eyes

which they're souls build walls.

thick, strong, and cracked walls

that wont fall

until they feel

real.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

they hide behind their eyes --- I like this line.

Most thought-provoking, giving me pause to ponder...
And when is made to think, it is always a good thing. Great write.