Deflation

A very short story that is meant to be funny. You can be the judge of that!

This was supposed to be the tale of my life, and death, as a balloon animal, but I’m afraid I can’t expand anymore.

Author's Note

Go ahead then...verbally abuse me for wasting a minute of your life!

Reviews

[Baz]

ha ha! funny indeed. nice one!

[Christopher J. Dawson]

HA! Nonsense, I laughed and find a laugh to be a good use of a minute!

[brownie]

This definetly deserves to be the winning piece. It may be short, but it packs a punch!

[Ms. Gruye]

Congrats on this winning piece.
Clever, clever, never better!

[Emily Quinn]

oh how tragic. short but sweet

[Samuel Dickens]

Oh yes, the loss of elasticity--an affliction I know very well. Creams and lotions don't help.

[Nautili]

very funny. not used to this side of you!

Lol this is hilarious! I love it sooo much!